《精彩托福TOEFL写作200篇点评》【PDF版免费下载】


发布人:sunqian           2015-05-16 14:43:08

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摘要: 托福写作范文几乎是每一个学生在备战托福考试中都会模仿的,网上有关满分、精华、优秀等等类似的托福作文有很多,但是这些内容都不一定是真题满分作文,本文精彩托福TOEFL写作200篇点评,全部来源于ETS官方满分范文,是大家在备战托福写作过程中必不可少的资料。

  《精彩托福TOEFL写作200篇点评》【部分内容】

  It is important for the government to allocate money on beautiful things, not just for things that are practical.

  类别:比较类

  参考思路:

  1. In developed countries where people lead an affluent lifestyle, governments have good reasons to allocate money on beautiful things, say, galleries and architecture, in that what satisfies the nationals is not mere convenience, but also higher-level enjoyment.

  2. However, in poverty-stricken countries, practical things like infrastructure and livelihood should still be highest on the priority list of governments, given their financially stressed condition.

  扩展题目:

  1.Though modern agriculture damages the environment, feeding the world’s growing population is more important than protecting the environment.

  2. Governments should focus budgets more on environmental protection rather than economic development.

  3. It is more important for governments to put money in improving the Internet access than improving public transportation.

  总之,了解了两类国家的特点,积累一些常用表达和替换,各准备一个例子比如美国和苏里南,你就是站在政府类题目巅峰的男人/女人。

  文章给出三个理由解释为什么Marsupials are less competitive than placentals

  1.因为M动物在母体内容发育的不成熟,导致其出生后身体素质差。

  2. M动物,比如说,松鼠 对体温控制的不好。不如P动物的体温恒定,随着外界变化体温。这一点证明M动物适应能力弱。

  3. 南美洲,M动物数量和种类比P少,说明同样的情况下,M动物竞争力差。例如:澳大利亚,由M动物统治,因为这里P少,less competitive。

  听力反驳:

  1. M动物在母体内也能得到很好的保护,也有一个很好的发展,母体内有免疫力,身体素质并不差

  2. M动物的体温能够跟随外界环境的变化而变化, 体现灵活的适应外界环境。

  3. 澳大利亚,M动物已经生活了好多年,以前的时候M和p都在这里生活,但是M统治这个地区而不是不是P,证明M很有竞争力。

  参考答案:

  The article discusses why Marsupials are less competitive than placentals, while the lecturer disputes thoseideas presented in the passage with several proofs.

  According to the article, newborn of placentals are well grown in the mother’s body, and the newborn of marsupial, called Joeys, are not well-developed. In contrast, the professor of the lecture maintains that baby of marsupial are also well-protected in the mother’s body so they are also very strong.

  In addition, the writer holds that marsupials could not to keep their body temperature constant. However, the lecturers believes that changing their body temperature according to the environment proves that they have strong ability to adapt to the environment, which indicates that those animals are competitive.

  Finally, it is depicted in the passage that marsupials only dominate in Australia where Placentals are not so common, which produces no danger for marsupials. Nevertheless, the speaker refutes that long time ago, both Placentals and marsupials lived in Australia. With the time going, only marsupial survived, which suggests that marsupials are more competitive than Placentals are.

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